Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Excerpt from my novel, Just Ravishing


          Two days later and I have not heard from Agnes.  She missed Professor Vulture’s class this morning.  I texted her and asked if everything was ok.  I haven’t heard back.  I stare at my computer screen and then down at the paperback copy of Jane Eyre I am half way through for my literature class with Professor Vulture.  I am only a few days into the semester and can tell the class is going to kick my butt.  I read the assignment description on the paper by my computer keyboard.

Assignment: Compose a 3 page paper on one of the following topics:

1) How does Charlotte Bronte incorproate elements of Gothic tradition into the novel?

2) Is Jane Eyre a likable protangonist? Why or why not? 

 

I look back at my computer screen.  Starting a paper is always the hardest part.  I sigh and lean back in my chair.  Just then my phone beeps.  A text pops up on the screen.  It’s from Agnes.

            “Come meet at the pit.” I am glad for an excuse to procrastinate.   I grab my purse off my bed and then my gray North Silver Birch college sweatshirt off the back of my desk chair and head out the door with one arm already in one arm of the sweatshirt.  I finish pulling on the sweatshirt as I continue walking.  Never the most coordinated, I drop my purse twice and almost fall down the stairs before I am done pulling on the sweatshirt.  The night is a bit cool. It is pretty much fact that the mid-west does not have a fall.  There is summer and then there is winter.

            As I turn the corner of one of the dorm buildings I see flashing blue lights reflecting off the side of the building before I see the cop cars, and ambulance, and yellow tape.  My eyes race over the chilling black word that appears repeatedly on the yellow tape, “caution, caution, caution, caution.” An EMT pushes a stretcher down a ramp out of the dorm building.  There is no one on the stretcher just a black bag.  I can’t pull my eyes away from the it. Someone is in there.  Someone is dead.  Questions race through my mind.  Who? How? Why? A realization suddenly strikes me.  This dorm building is where Agnes and Emma live.  I start to feel nauseous and start walking again.  I pick up my pace and soon I am jogging.  The tall chimney and old red brick of The Pit soon comes into view.  Bells chime as I swing the door open.  As soon as I step inside I am enveloped by warmth and the sweet and spicy smells of cinnamon, nutmeg, and espresso.  I tug off my sweatshirt. 

            “Asa,” Someone calls my name.  I look around the room.  It is busy tonight.  All the tables are full and I barely hear my name over the commotion but I spot Agnes sitting at a small round table in a corner against the wall.  She is waving at me, motioning me over.  I wave back and head towards her.  “Did you see it?”  She asks before I have even taken a seat.  She is leaning on the table in my direction.  Her voice is an urgent whisper and her eyes are wide and lined in dark circles. 

            “I saw a few police cars by one of the dorms if that is what you mean.  There is an ambulance and a stretcher with . . .gosh, Agnes, you look awful.”

            “Yeah, haven’t slept much. And the black bag. I know. She’s dead.”  Agnes looks around the room cautiously.  “She was murdered, Asa.”

            “Who?” I am feeling nauseous again.  A waiter comes to our table and Agnes doesn’t answer my question right away.   I order a medium vanilla macchiato.  The waiter disappears and I turn expectantly to Agnes.  She watches until the waiter is at the counter before she turns back to me.

            “Emma.”

“What?”  I can’t believe what I am hearing.

“You know how she went out Tuesday night and didn’t meet us for dinner?  Well, she never came home but I got a text apologizing and saying meet me for breakfast.  We were supposed to meet here and she never showed up. And then tonight I came back to our dorm and I found her . . . dead.”   Her eyes glimmer with unshed tears.  “She was lying on her bed.  I thought she was just resting at first.  Her hands were crossed over her chest which was weird, but Emma was kind of odd anyway so . . .” She sniffs and looks down at her hands.  I follow her gaze.  She is holding something.  It is a black feather.  “I found this on her body.”  She hands it to me. I hold it by the quick and spin it between my thumb and fingers.  It shimmers emerald and sapphire in the light.

            “Strange,” I am suddenly thinking about my encounters with the raven in the admission’s building parking lot and then in front of my dorm. Maybe it’s the murderer’s calling card of sorts.

            “It’s shit is what it is.  Bull shit.”  Agnes pulls the sleeves of her long sleeved shirt into her hands and wipes her eyes.  “It’s happened again.”  She points to the feather still in my hands.  I hand it back and immediately feel that I should wash my hands.  I wipe them on my jeans instead.

            “What do you mean?”

            “Emma is not the first.”  Agnes says solemnly.

            “What?”

            “Yeah,” Agnes takes a deep breath and leans back in her chair.  She looks cautiously about the room before leaning in again.  “First it was Trixie Rushwell last fall.  She just disappeared.  No one found her.  The week before Christmas break Nancy Morgan went missing as well and this spring Victoria White disappeared.”

            “So Emma is the first body that’s been found?”

            “That I know of at least. Thing is, I am not sure they think it’s a murder.”

            “What do you mean?”           

            “There was a suicide note . . . but it was not her handwriting.  I know her handwriting.”

            “And she didn’t seem suicidal.”

            “Exactly,”

            “The police will figure that out, don’t you think?”

            “I hope so, but I don’t know.  Whether they do or not I doubt President Eldr is going to want the school to know there could be a murderer on the loose. He’s kind of a creep anyway.”  I hadn’t thought about that.  But yes, there could be a murderer on the loose.  The waiter comes back at that moment and sets down my coffee.  My stomach is churning but I hate to waste a perfectly good coffee so I pick up the mug and bring it to my lips.  The barista has made a design in the cream on the top of the coffee.  Maybe it is supposed to be a leaf, but all I see is a feather.  I wince and choke down a sip.

- By Joy Creech excerpt from Just Ravishing

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